70. Keep Dying And Keep Trying? Django Wexler’s “How to Become the Dark Lord”

A chosen one is tired of dying for humanity in Django Wexler’s latest rollicking fantasy adventure, out 21st May 2024 from Orbit.


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Cover of Django Wexler’s How To Become the Dark Lord and Die Trying

Django Wexler, How to Become the Dark Lord and Die Trying. London & New York: Orbit. 2024.

It’s always more difficult to review a book you loved than one you hated or found mediocre. On top of wanting to do it justice and worrying about falling shot, love is an emotion of vulnerability. Admitting to it exposes your soft underbelly.

I’ve enjoyed many of Django Wexler’s books, and loved at least two outright. But I’ll be honest, this one might be my favourite so far. Sarcastic, fast-paced, bitingly funny and gripping as all fuck: it’s just too much fun to put down.

How to Become the Dark Lord opens with its protagonist a captive, in the process of being tortured, eventually to death (if she can’t speed things along first). Davi has been here before, far more often than she’d like. She’s the Chosen One (allegedly), yanked into fantasyland from a world she can hardly remember, and supposed to save the kingdom of humans from the Dark Lord’s hordes. She’s failed — and died — at least two hundred times at this point. Every time she dies, she wakes up at the same point she started: naked in a mountain pond, with a wizard yammering in her ear.

Davi’s just about had it with being the Chosen One. If you can’t beat ’em, join them: it’s time to see if she can’t become the Dark Lord instead. Thus begins a journey into the unknown, off the edges of all the maps that Davi’s ever seen: the enemies of all her earlier lives become her allies as she amasses an army (and applies decent leadership skills and an understanding of logistics to the undertaking) and marches to the conclave that selects the next Dark Lord. She’s really done with being tortured to death! She wants a challenge she might just be able to succeed at!

It’s interesting to be in the first-person perspective of a protagonist who has a hard time seeing other people as entirely… real isn’t quite the word. From Davi’s point of view, the next time she dies, all of this will reset: all the dead people will be alive again, all the consequences will be set at nought. She’s the only person who’ll even remember. To her credit and Wexler’s, this doesn’t actually turn her into a sociopath.

The first time she dies and doesn’t end up back where she started — the first time in countless lives and deaths — it provokes an existential crisis.

In many ways, this is an over-the-top, irreverent narrative. Davi has been desensitised to a great deal in terms of violence, and the narrative reflects a fairly (and understandably, under the circumstances) cavalier attitude towards it. Despite that, and despite her conviction that none of what she experiences will be lasting for anyone but her, she nonetheless cares about the people she finds herself responsible for, and finds herself forming real emotional connections, often despite herself. (I’m particularly fond of her developing relationship with the hot orc woman who’s basically her first recruit to the “Davi for Dark Lord” campaign and who ends up as her most senior captain as the army expands: they’re adorable idiots.) And yet, for all its over-the-top relish, its irreverent (and betimes jaded) protagonist, and its absolute commitment to the bit, Wexler isn’t writing parody. There’s an earnest core in here, alongside the fast-paced adventure and the appreciation for the ridiculous: a commentary on the fantasy genre and on human nature, an argument about whether actions matter even if their effects aren’t lasting.

(How to Become the Dark Lord is also in conversation with isekai as a genre, but I’m a lot less familiar with isekai than I’d have to be in order to say anything intelligent about the conversation that it’s having.)

How to Become the Dark Lord ends with a cliffhanger and a number of open questions. It’s a wild ride. I loved it. I really want to know what happens next, and as far as I’m concerned the sequel can’t come soon enough.

(No, seriously, I will FIND YOU and MAKE YOU TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. I mean it! I cannot bear to wait YEARS!)

Buy HOW TO BECOME THE DARK LORD from Blackwell’s (affiliate link).

PS. This is post number 70 because I had already written and scheduled no. 69 for next week, but decided to have this one go live earlier without changing the numbers. A glimpse behind the chaotic curtain!

61. A River of Golden Bones by A.K. Mulford, and some administrative updates

In this post: a review of A River of Golden Bones by A.K. Mulford; moving off Substack to WordPress; ongoing efforts to Plan What I’m Talking About.


Cover art for A River of Golden Bones

A.K. Mulford, A River of Golden Bones. New York: HarperCollins. 2023.

I’d never encountered A.K. Mulford’s work before picking up A River of Golden Bones for review, though a little research reveals that they’re a TikTok personality who has previously published a series of novels which began in self-published form before Harper Voyager acquired world English rights.

A River of Golden Bones is the perfect storm of things that, while in themselves may be generally unobjectionable or in theory even interesting, in this particular form are not for me. Sleeping Beauty, werewolves, fated soulmates, and more focus on romance and sex than worldbuilding and intrigue: this novel is like six different fanfic tropes climbed out of the ether and collided with a rough burning kiss as their mouths crashed together.

I say this with neither particular praise nor particular criticism for fanfiction as a mode of fiction. It has its own conventions and particular forms of storytelling, its own conversations and sense of genre. Its cross-pollination with the forms and conventions of “original” fiction, particularly in the realm of science fiction and fantasy — or perhaps I should say the fertile spread of its conventions and tropes into the realm of original fiction — is a rather fascinating phenomenon, and one that speaks to a democratisation in the culture of long-form fiction. What makes A River of Golden Bones likely to appeal to a wide audience are those traits that it shares with both fanfiction and genre romance (another very popular field): its failings, for a reader who prefers more fantasy in their romantic fantasy, are failings that it shares with a great preponderance of works in these fields, and viewed solely in terms of the genre conventions and expectations of those fields, are not not necessarily failings at all.

In the world of A River of Golden Bones, Wolves — shapeshifters who can move between human and wolf forms at will — rule all the kingdoms. Wolf society is patriarchal and patrilineal. Humans live separately from Wolves, are physically weaker, and heal more slowly, but have — apparently — a more egalitarian approach to society (across all the kingdoms) than their overlords, and more genders than the Wolves’ binary of male and female.

Calla and Briar are twin sisters. They are the last heirs of the Gold Wolf rulers of the kingdom of Olmdere. When they were born, the dark sorceress Sawyn killed their parents and took over their kingdom. Their lives were saved by the faery Vellia, who came in response to their mother’s last wish, and who has raised them in the forest far from any others. Only a handful of people know Briar survived: she has been raised to fulfil the betrothal arranged before her birth and marry Grae, heir to King Nero, joining their kingdoms (and, theoretically, gaining an ally to overthrow Sawyn). Calla has been raised in Briar’s shadow, educated to be her protector. No one know she’s Briar’s twin except for Nero and Grae himself — who visited her when they were all still children and became her friend.

The betrothal between Briar and Grae is on the cusp of being fulfilled when Calla learns that Nero never meant to help them recover Olmdere, but only use Briar to legitimate his claim to Olmdere’s mines. Then, before the wedding can be completed, Briar and Calla both publicly discover they have soulmates, an unusual and unexpected development. Briar’s is a distant female royal relative called Maez. But Calla’s… is Grae. Worse, Sawyn shows up, kidnaps Maez, and curses Briar into an enchanted sleep. Calla, still an unknown, escapes Sawyn’s focus — but now Nero means to have her wed Grae while doing nothing for either her sister or her country.

Calla’s not willing to stand for that. She’ll rescue Briar’s soulmate on her own if she has to, and overthrow Sawyn on her own as well, for good measure. She flees Nero’s court and falls in with a band of travelling (human) entertainers headed for Olmdere, where Sawyn is hosting a celebration to commemorate the twentieth anniversary of her victory. Grae defies his father to follow, along with his two best friends/personal guards. They will face Sawyn together and triumph. Along the way, Calla discovers that their gender identity better matches one of the nonbinary human ones than the Wolves’ one that they were assigned at birth.

As fated soulmates, Calla and Grae are extremely attracted to each other. Once they overcome a small matter of miscommunication about Grae’s loyalties and his intentions, they have lots of sex. Lots of sex. (Including sex at moments that makes the reader strongly question their judgment.) The sex is never awkward or unsatisfying, and neither partner needs to talk very much at all about what they want (except in what’s, I suppose, meant to be erotic dirty talk), and it is described in thorough, albeit somewhat clichéd terms. Unfortunately, from my point of view, there’s no real frisson of feeling to the sex scenes and no real character in them either: a lot of frenzy and burning and sliding and thrusting, screaming and grunting and mewling (a word I would generally prefer not to encounter in a sexual context) and orgasms galore, but not much in the way of erotic charge. It feels perfunctory and mechanical: the sex scenes carry no narrative or emotional weight besides the titillatory. In consequence, if you fail to find them titillating, you’re liable to find them tedious.

The action scenes, too, seem to serve largely mechanical purposes. They have little relationship to the characters’ emotional development, while on a practical (logical, strategic) level, everyone in this novel — the most villainous villains and the very heroic heroes alike — makes some rather baffling choices about who to confront, when, with what allies and to what purpose. The action scenes exist so that the reader can be assured that Calla is badass and Grae is badass and hot, or so it seems: I cannot quite bring myself to believe in their stakes. And the criticism of patriarchy, sexism and discrimination that the novel contains is, from my point of view, too shallow to even count as a thematic argument.

A River of Golden Bones is told in the first person perspective, from Calla’s point of view, and Calla’s personal journey of discovering that they’re not exactly the woman they always thought they were is the most compelling element of the entire novel. I didn’t expect the boyfriend:everything else ratio to skew quite so hard to the boyfriend end of the scale, though, for all that it’s marketed as the new breed of fantasy romance. I read this shortly after T. Kingfisher’s most recent fantasy romance, Paladins Faith, and I can conclude that it’s not that I don’t enjoy romantic storylines in my fantasy, but that I prefer them a) weirder and b) having more complicated plot events around which the romance and characters can grow, encounter obstacles, and change than A River of Golden Bones provides.

If you enjoy reading about young people discovering new things about themselves while killing their enemies and having a lot of sex with their soulmate, you may enjoy A River of Golden Bones. Let me know what you think of it if so: I’m interested to hear what people with a greater preference for romance have to say about it.


Administrivia:

You may or not be aware that I was running a Substack newsletter. After Substack’s management basically doubled down on being the kind of people who want outright N*zis and white supremacists to make money, I’m moving my all the stuff that used to be on Substack over here, as the most cost-effective option. This doesn’t effect anything here, except that I’m going to be numbering my posts (started doing that on Substack, realised I liked it) and that sometimes, something might be behind a subscription paywall.

Very little of my writing is behind a paywall, even at Patreon (where you can support my efforts to write more about history and history books, as well as science fiction and fantasy), so not much should change at all.


Between one thing and another1, I didn’t post at all in December and January about my ongoing personal research project on captivity in antiquity. The first excited flurry of READ ALL THE THINGS has calmed down, leaving me with a few options to work through for how to direct my attention. I’ll report back when I feel that there’s something else to say.

And most nonfiction reading came, in fact, to a bit of a standstill in all the hectic urgency of the months in question. It should pick up again a bit now, so I’ll be reporting in on that. (Some helpful folks on Bluesky gave me some pointers for things to read on Japanese history, since I have a curiosity at the moment.)

That’s it from me for now.


  1. Honestly, it’s because I had no idea what December could be like with a small child discovering the joy of presents and Exciting Events in tow. And it turns out that it is intense. ↩︎

The Consumption of Justice by Daniel Lord Smail: a fascinating history about law and the public performance of feelings

Daniel Lord Smail, The Consumption of Justice: Emotions, Publicity, and Legal Culture in Marseille, 1264-1423. Ithaca NY: Cornell University Press. 2013. (2003.)

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Cover art for The Consumption of Justice

The Consumption of Justice is a very interesting book. It takes as a focus for investigation the law courts of Marseille between the thirteenth and the early fifteenth centuries, and examines them from the point of view of the public performance of emotions like enmity, anger, and friendship. Smail’s thesis is that, rather than being driven to use law courts by a growing royal monopoly on violence, Marseille’s residents chose to use the law courts as one among a number of tools to enact their enmities.

Smail divides his work into five chapters, an introduction, a conclusion, and an appendix on the nature of legal records from this period in Marseille. In chapter one, “Using the Courts,” he outlines, using specific cases, how the courts of Marseille operated, what kinds of cases they oversaw, and how in general people interacted with the local legal systems. Chapter two, “Structures of Hatred,” discusses how enmity, hatred, friendship and kinship were socially constructed and performed as emotions, and how this came into play in a legal system where a witness who was too much a friend or too much an enemy to one of the parties at law could be forbidden from giving testimony. Chapter three, “The Pursuit of Debt,” looks specifically at how cases for the recovery of debt enacted or exacerbated otherwise-existing enmities: debt represents by far the largest number of encounters with the legal system.

Chapter four, “Body and Bona,” discusses the penalties assessed and assigned by the courts in Marseilles. “Bona,” here is a term referring not only to someone’s goods but also to their good name, their reputation, as I understand it in Smail’s explanation. Marseillaise courts preferred to penalise the bona rather than the body, and people potentially subject to capital penalties usually fled into exile and negotiated their return from outside the Marseillaise courts’ jurisdiction. In practice, it appears, corporeal punishments were reserved for people who had no bona to extract penalties from (which means no kin or friends willing to lend them means, either): foreigners or poor people of confirmed bad reputation. And chapter five, “The Public Archive,” discusses the public, outdoors nature of law courts in Marseilles, and how community knowledge of individuals and their deeds and possessions was a vital part of what courts considered as evidence.

Smail’s work here is readable and accessible to the interested layperson (not my period, but I found everything easy to follow) and filled with fascinating details and the traces of centuries-old grudges and affections. Like The Voices of Nîmes, it brings the past to life in the form of its people.

The Mercenary Mediterranean by Hussein Fancy: fascinatingly complex history

Hussein Fancy, The Mercenary Mediterranean: Sovereignty, Religion, and Violence in the Medieval Crown of Aragon. Chicago: University of Chicago Press. 2016.

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Cover art for The Mercenary Mediterranean

The Mercenary Mediterranean is an award-winning history focusing on the thirteenth and fourteenth century territories of Aragon, ruled by Christian kings, and its Muslim neighbours. Fancy investigates the phenomenon by which Muslim holy warriors and crusading Christian knights took service under each others’ rulers, though Fancy’s focus is primarily on the jenets (Latin jeneti, Spanish jinetes, Catalan ginets, a term for Muslim soldiers in the pay of Christian lords during the 13th and 14th centuries). Through detailed study of the surviving documentation in Arabic and the Romance languages, including the archives of the Crown of Aragon, he traces what can be known of certain individuals as they crossed and recrossed borders between polities, using their careers to examine social and religious relations in the frontier zone between Christian and Muslim polities. He also uses them to examine the self-presentation of the kings of Aragon (with their connection to the Holy Roman Empire) in a European and pan-Mediterranean context.

While Fancy acknowledges the potential purely materialistic motives for mercenary service — either taking service as a mercenary or employing mercenaries as a lord or king — he makes a persuasive argument for the importance of religious considerations on both sides, a multi-vocal, multi-factorial set of considerations, goals, conflicts and compromises.

This is a fascinating book, and one which made me want to take copious notes (that I did not, in the end, have time for) because it is also a complex one. I wish I had the background to put some of Fancy’s arguments in context: it’s clear that the borderland societies of medieval Iberia and its North Africa neighbours are a truly rich and complicated area of study and one that must grapple with an even more politicised history than most places.

Anyway. I enjoyed reading it. Now I need a really good overview so I can fill in the giant gaps in my understanding.

Seashaken Houses by Tom Nancollas: lighting the reefs of the sea

Tom Nancollas, Seashaken Houses: A Lighthouse History from Eddystone to Fastnet. London: Penguin. 2019. (2018.)

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Covert art for Seashaken Houses: a drawing of Fastnet Rock lighthouse with a wave breaking halfway up the lighthouse’s sides. (Illustration by Chris Wormell.)

Seashaken Houses is part history, part meditation on the difficulties and ambitions inherent in the mere idea of rock lighthouses, and part peculiar, isolated travelogue. It is, all in all, a fantastic book.

If you live by the sea, or spend any time on it, at least in these islands off the western edge of Europe, lighthouses form a background part of your awareness. I grew up regularly walking past the Baily Lighthouse, which has had a light for mariners on or around that spot since the 1660s, and got married in the museum now housing its old optic (the assembly of lenses and mirrors that give a lighthouse a powerful, and sometimes colourful, beam of light), and today I can see two, a harbour light and Rockabill, whenever I go for a walk on a clear day.

But even those of us who live with the sea as a constant murmur in the edge of our consciousness might not know the difference between a lighthouse and a rock lighthouse. Your ordinary lighthouse, however extraordinary its light, is built on regular land, whether mainland or island. A rock lighthouse is built on an offshore reef or rock. That might be one which protrudes some metres above the surf at high tide like Fastnet Rock, thirteen kilometres from mainland Co. Cork, or which is only exposed between high tides like the Eddystone Rocks, nineteen kilometres off Plymouth Sound. So the construction of a rock lighthouse is at least a triple challenge: not only how to design a lighthouse to withstand the force of breaking waves, but how to deliver and stage the building materials and actually build a structure on firm foundations without drowning your labourers when wind and waves and tides all present such obstacles. These challenges still exist today: indeed, they’re one of the reasons why offshore wind farms, while growing, are still far from ubiquitous. The first rock lighthouses were built in the age before steam, and had to invent approaches (many of which failed) to these engineering challenges from first principles.

Nancollas writes lucidly, with great clarity and with an eye for atmosphere and detail that is at times almost novelistic. He conveys a sincere passion for his subject, and though he does not investigate every rock lighthouse in these islands1 — only Eddystone, Bell Rock, Haulbowline, Perch Rock, Wolf Rock, Bishop Rock, and Fastnet are treated in detail — he divides his approach chronologically. Eddystone, thus, with its multiple lighthouses (beginning in the 1690s, and culminating with the present structure, from which a light began showing in 1882), becomes a touchstone for the entire project, a site that Nancollas returns to as the techniques of lighthouse building evolve and the careers of lighthouse keepers become more legible. It is fascinating all the way through.

From the point of view of a fascinated historian, I wanted footnotes and citations, archival numbers and references. But while Nancollas has included only a very brief page of notes on his sources, it is just about enough to find further reading.

I’m going to be pressing this book into people’s hands for a while, I think. It’s a brilliant piece of work.


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  1. “These islands” is the circumlocution used in local diplomatic circles to avoid more contested terms for the landmasses containing Ireland, Northern Ireland, Scotland, England and Wales. (“British Isles” is not acceptable from a political point of view, because it implies the political entity “Britain” has rights over the whole of them, and other alternatives have yet to gain common currency, though I confess to appreciating both the “Atlantic Archipelago” and the “North Atlantic Islands” as politically non-committal efforts.) ↩︎

Entertaining sword and sorcery adventure: Lord of a Shattered Land by Howard Andrew Jones

Howard Andrew Jones, Lord of A Shattered Land. New York: Baen Books. 2023.

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Cover art of Lord of a Shattered Land

Lord of A Shattered Land harks back to an older style of fantasy without reviving the racism and sexism of yesteryear. It’s a fix-up novel, comprising several previous published stories fitted into a wider narrative and expanded. It reminds me of David Drake’s “Lord of the Isles” series, in that it’s clearly in dialogue with the storytelling tradition of Robert E. Howard while lacking Howard’s conviction in the virile power of barbarism (and its inevitable triumph over civilisation).

Hanuvar is one of the last survivors of destroyed Volanus, and once its greatest general. When the Dervan empire came to conquer, they killed his people and tore down his city, leading perhaps a thousand survivors away in chains. Hanuvar, too, survived against his every expectation, washed up on a foreign shore. He knows the fate of his people. He means to find the survivors — find his adult daughter — set them free, and lead them to safety. Every one of them, if he can. All he has is his own skill and wits. The Dervans have the mightiest empire in the world.

This is a fantasy novel, so of course Hanuvar has far more success than he has any right to.

The Dervan empire is explicitly based on Rome, down to the language, though it draws from a grab-bag of periods in Roman history, not limiting itself to either Republic or Empire. Volanus, on the other hand, is inspired by Carthage but draws very little from the historical Punic-speaking cities of north Africa: Volanus is (or was) a less oppressive society than their contemporaries, having gender equality and not keeping slaves. It makes it easier to sympathise with Hanuvar and the survivors of the Dervan genocide: Volanus’s culture is more “modern” and less inclined to genocidal conquest. (In a story where they are as bad as each other, sympathy might be harder to come by.)

For most of the novel, each new chapter is a new story relating one of Hanuvar’s adventures on his way to find and rescue some of his people. They follow one another chronologically and, put together, form a coherent overall narrative and character arc for Hanuvar, but they are distinctly episodes with their own individual narrative arcs rather than being a seamless whole. It takes a while to get used to it. Many of these episodes remind the astute reader of Robert E. Howard (or Xena: Warrior Princess: put your mythology and folklore and weird anthropology in a blender and let it whirr).

Hanuvar is a very competent character. I enjoy competence. I enjoy adventure. I enjoyed Lord of a Shattered Land (I enjoyed it a lot), even though I’m occasionally baffled by some of its choices. They remain entertaining choices.

Forbidden Knowledge by Hannah Marcus: censorship and medicine 1500s/1600s Italy

Forbidden Knowledge by Hannah Marcus: censorship and medicine 1500s/1600s Italy

Hannah Marcus, Forbidden Knowledge: Medicine, Science and Censorship in Early Modern Italy. Chicago: Chicago University Press. 2020.

This is the cover image of the book discussed. It's quite plain.
Cover of Forbidden Knowledge.

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The history of censorship is fascinating. Censorship in the popular imagination largely seems to involve book-burning, or preventing things from being made, read, or shown in their entirety, for a given geographical region or the world entire. In reality it’s a lot more present in the blacked-out lines in the response to a freedom-of-information request, and subverted in ways comparable to the backchannel PDF articles passed between numerous academics who publish in prohibitively expensive-to-access journals on account of the career-benefiting prestige and then make it quietly known among their peers and students that they’re happy to send a copy of the article to anyone who asks, in fact don’t even bother asking just pass it on. (This is far from every university-employed scholar, I should note.) Censorship is as much a question of access, licit and otherwise, as it is of erasure and destruction: it’s a negotiation between different forms of authority, or between authority and those who would question it. The license to see is not the license to (re)produce.

Hannah Marcus’s Forbidden Knowledge examines that negotiation in post-Reformation Italy between (mainly) medical doctors and the censorship apparatus of the Catholic Church. Censorship became a particularly fraught issue in the wake of the Reformation on account of Protestant thinkers being considered damned and their works anathema to good Catholics, and on account of the heightened scrutiny that philosophical and natural philosophical works attracted in a new, confessionally-divided Europe. (They attracted scrutiny before, of course, but the Reformation ushered in new and lasting divisions and baptised them in blood.)

For Italian doctors, this presented a set of interesting challenges — particularly in the Papal States but also across the Italian states, as local church authorities took their cues from Rome — since many novel and useful discoveries in medicine (and pharmacology, by their standards) were made and subsequently published by men on the wrong side of the confessional divide. And intellectual developments by men who preferred to adhere to the Catholic Church could be anathematised for diverging too far from orthodoxy. Marcus discusses how doctors engaged with the institutions and apparatus of church censorship to preserve and circulate “useful” medical and (natural) philosophical texts in an expurgated form, or to access the unexpurgated versions under the system of licenses that developed. Some doctors entered wholeheartedly into the process of expurgation and censorship; others sought to evade the restrictions placed on their access to censored (or censorship-worthy) material. The enthusiasm of the institutions of the Catholic Church for censorship and expurgation varied by location and by year, and different individuals took different approaches.

This is an interesting and readable work of history that digs into both intellectual and institutional history to throw light on the processes of censorship and its social and individual effects. I found it fascinating.

Reviews of The Jasad Heir and The Third Daughter at Tor.com

Plus some other reviews at Locus. Any opinions to share?

I reviewed Sara Hashem’s The Jasad Heir for Tor.com, and I wish I’d enjoyed it more:

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Cover art for The Jasad Heir

Told primarily in the first person from Sylvia’s point of view, The Jasad Heir has an appealing energy and an emotional vividness that will, I suspect, win over plenty of readers, particularly those drawn to the high emotional stakes and earnest, passionate sensibilities common in YA, of which it reminds me. The youthful heroine with a traumatic past and dark secrets, some secret even from herself, determined to live for herself alone but betrayed to selflessness by the human connections she can’t deny; the antagonist-hero, handsome and puissant, haunted by his failures and his overbearing father, cursed with a unique ability; a religious contest of strength, cunning, and survival; the fate of kingdoms hanging in the balance. It’s a winning combination.

Alas, for me, the reading experience is marred by a number of flaws.

Link.

I also wish I’d enjoyed Adrienne Tooley’s The Third Daughter more, but maybe next time, right?

Cover art of THE THIRD DAUGHTER
Cover art for The Third Daughter

Right up until the novel’s final quarter, I was absolutely enjoying the ride. Tooley has a strong voice, and the slow unspooling of attraction between Elodie and Sabine is delicately and skillfully drawn, which makes up for a number of issues I would otherwise find frustrating . Sabine’s growing confidence and willingness to confront her own feelings is dealt with well, and so are Elodie’s complicated love for, and jealousy of, her sister and her reluctant realisations about her privilege and the state of her mother’s kingdom.

Link.

Over at Locus, here’s a sample of what I’ve been writing about:

S.L. Huang’s The Water Outlaws, an excellent book. Huang just keeps getting better:

Cover art for The Water Outlaws

Huang has written a gloriously cinematic novel, one that delights in martial arts tropes. The Water Outlaws’ bandits remind me a touch of the Robin Hood mythos, while being rather more complex and rather less straightforwardly heroic than many renditions of the Heroic Out­law myth often are. The novel zips along like a high-wire act, feeling faster and shorter than its nearly 500 pages, with characters drawn in vivid strokes

Link.

M.C. Carrick’s Labyrinth’s Heart, a fantastic conclusion to an excellent trilogy:

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The setting is richly detailed, with a deep sense of place. Carrick evokes atmosphere deftly, and Nadežra draws from the same well as Ellen Kushner’s Swordspoint and Melissa Scott and the late Lisa A. Barnett’s Astreiant series, where duellists and brawlers, con artists and revolutionaries and fortune-tellers (false and truthful) rub up against aristocrats and schol­ars, and slums and sewers provide counterpoint to lavish fetes and the upholstered parlours of the wealthy: the kind of sensibility that’s always struck me as a working in a very Renaissance vein, even when it doesn’t draw directly on the aesthetics of late medieval Italy.

Link.

And K.B. Wagers’ The Ghosts of Trappist, which brings some space opera and some (mostly metaphorical) hauntings:

Cover art of The Ghosts of Trappist

The Ghosts of Trappist is a novel that enjoys playing with metaphorical hauntings, as well as with the ghost ships that are the title’s most obvious referent. The past and its consequences are a palpable presence for all of the characters, one that leaves imprints on who they are and the choices they make in the present. One of the titular ghosts of Trappist is a piece of the past older than any of the characters expect, and it means they – and Sapphi in particular – are going to have to reckon with some dangerous revelations that have the potential to disrupt… everything about the Trappist settlement.

Link.

Walter Duvall Penrose, Jr., POSTCOLONIAL AMAZONS: FEMALE MASCULINITY AND COURAGE IN ANCIENT GREEK AND SANSKRIT LITERATURE

Walter Duvall Penrose, Jr., Postcolonial Amazons: Female Masculinity and Courage in Ancient Greek and Sanskrit Literature. Oxford: Oxford University Press. 2016.

I watched this book on Oxford University Press’s website for months, before and after its publication, until the point at which I could — barely — justify a purchase. Postcolonial Amazons promises so much: “a ground-breaking re-evaluation of the place of martial women in the ancient world, bridging the gap between myth and historical reality and expanding our conception of the Amazon archetype.” It promises me a treatment of Amazons that uses a postcolonial frame to examine the periphery of the Greek world and the Indian one, a book that employs both Greek and Sanskrit literature to revision notions of “the Amazon” in the ancient world.

Any scholar who attempts such a treatment requires both depth and breadth of knowledge. Most of the archaeological evidence for Scythian and Sarmatian burials — which are two of the cultures most closely associated with the idea of Amazons, and which have provided female warrior burials — has been published in Russian, and some scholars have argued that surviving Central Asia epic cycles from the middle ages and later may preserve some clues about ancient cultures in the trans-Caucasus and the region of Georgia and Armenia. Indian history — especially the Mauryan and Gupta periods, and the time contemporaneous with the Hellenistic kingdoms in Bactria — and Sanskrit literature is its own well-developed field about which I know little (though I have tried to get access to the more recent works on Hellenistic Bactria), while a diachronic survey of Greek and Roman literature concerning not just Amazons but women who have participated in war — or who have accessed some form of masculinity — may require the knowledge of a career’s worth of study, especially if one is to speak of “female masculinity” in the ancient world and counterpoint it with “male femininity” — for it seems to me to make little sense to attempt to understand the one without the other.

Walter Duvall Penrose Jr. has some promising ideas, and connects them with moderate success. But throughout, Postcolonial Amazons feels much slighter than it should be, and much less underpinned by direct engagement with its sources. Let me take an example: Penrose cites Pomeroy on women in Hellenistic Egypt instead of directly engaging with the papyri that would have supported his argument in the early pages of this book, and this approach — cite an author who has already done some of the work, like Adrienne Mayor with The Amazons, which could have used more direct engagement with the Russian archaeological sources, or like Lindoff and Rubinson’s Are All Warriors Male? Gender Roles on the Ancient Eurasian Steppe, without peeling back the layers to make an independent examination of the material on which they base their conclusions, or at least to show that Penrose considered that material on his own — persists throughout. I cannot speak to the whole of Penrose’s work, but where I have some knowledge of the field, the lack of substantial and extended engagement with scholarship in languages other than French and English is notable (and for that matter, Penrose fails to nod to French archaeological work in Central Asia where it might give weight to some of his arguments).

Postcolonial Amazons feels more like a survey sprinkled with theory that, by and large, mystifies rather than illuminates — and I’ve read quite a bit of theory-heavy work in my time. It’s not that difficult to get a feel for when the theory is genuinely integrated with the material and supporting it, and when the material and the theory are a bit like roommates who live mostly separate lives, passing each other with witty asides and sidelong glances but lacking a really unified approach to their household. It’s a decent survey, and one with some interesting ideas (though Penrose is hobbled by the “let me tell you what I’m doing, no let me tell you what I am about to tell you” style of academic writing, which does his work no favours) but one that tantalises with glimpses of what it could have delivered, had it managed to pull off a deeper and more joined-up engagement with both literature and archaeology.  (I cannot help but wonder, here, whether Penrose might have managed a more satisfying book in an academic system that did not put so much pressure on its denizens to publish early and often, or whether he was simply not aiming to produce that kind of work — but failed to communicate that to me in his opening chapters.)

Yet there is food for thought here, in the connections that Penrose sketches but does not draw out in detail. It is a book worth reading — though perhaps not to the extent of paying sixty euro for the privilege — and one whose sketches and preliminary arguments I hope other scholars will use as springboards for their research. And some of the Indian material was an entire revelation to me, since it deals with matters of which I have been entirely ignorant.

Maybe one day, someone will write me a really satisfying work about the idea and the reality of Amazons in the ancient world. I’m going to keep looking.

HAMILTON’S BATTALION, by Rose Lerner, Courtney Milan, and Alyssa Cole

Rose Lerner, Courtney Milan, and Alyssa Cole, Hamilton’s Battalion. Independently published, 2017. Ebook.

The story of how I got to read Hamilton’s Battalion is actually a little bit of a saga, involving wrestling with Kobo in order to get access to the epub to read in Adobe Digital Editions, ultimately failing, and reading it on my phone. One’s phone is not, I find, an ideal platform on which to read interesting narratives…

That aside, Hamilton’s Battalion is based on an interesting conceit. It consists of three novellas, whose characters are all in some fashion connected with Alexander Hamilton’s troops during the battle of Yorktown — or in the case of the third novella, with Hamilton’s family after his death. These are inclusive romances: the first novella involves an estranged Jewish married couple who — despite Rachel having faked her death and enlisted under a male pseudonym — find each other again in the confusion of war, fall in love (perhaps really for the first time) and negotiate a better relationship; the second is an interracial love story between a rather peculiar white English officer (and deserter) and a black soldier from the colonial forces as they travel together in the aftermath of the battle of Yorktown (it also involves cheese: literal cheese); and the third is a romance between two black women, one of whom acts as secretary/maid to Hamilton’s widow after his death (as she collects material for a hagiographical biography), the other of whom is a dressmaker and small-business-owner.

Much to my disappointment, Alyssa Cole’s “That Could Be Enough” — the romance between two women — is the weakest story of the three. The characters do not feel rooted in their period, and their sexual mores and attitudes feel more modern than my impression of their time should allow. (Heather Rose Jones would know more, though.) But that aside, the pacing is weak, and it is a romance of the kind where if people just fucking talked to each other, there’d be no narrative tension at all.

(Seriously. Romances where people just need to have an honest conversation to solve all their problems are really frustrating. At least give people different goals and worldviews, things they need to negotiate and reconcile in order to be together, right?)

Rose Lerner’s “Promised Land” and Courtney Milan’s “The Pursuit Of…” are each in their own ways utter delights, though. In “Promised Land,” Rachel Mendelsohn has enlisted in the revolutionary army, and is now a corporal under the name of Ezra Jacobs. When she sees her husband, Nathan (who believes she’s dead), she has him arrested as a Loyalist spy — for that’s what she believes he is. But the truth is more complicated than that, and — thrown together by their new circumstance — they come to a new understanding of each other, of the circumstances that led Rachel to find their marriage intolerable, and of what led them each to where they are now. With a lot of mutual hurts and differences in how they viewed life to overcome — and also some of the difficulties of being Jewish with different attitudes towards Jewish dietary and religious practice, and of being Jewish among goyim — their journey towards new romance isn’t smooth. But it is rewarding.

“The Pursuit Of…” features Corporal John Hunter, a black man from Rhode Island, and Henry Latham, an English officer who so desperately does not want to return home that he would rather die than face the prospect. An officer, moreover, who has latched on to the ideas contained in the American Declaration of Independence and who believes in them with the fervour of the freshly-converted. On a journey together from Yorktown to Rhode Island, Henry comes face to face with what his ideals really ought to mean, in practice, and the gap between the ideals of the Declaration of Independence and practice in America. And John realises this white guy isn’t like most other white guys. From different backgrounds and with different experiences of the world, they end up falling in love. Milan’s trademark deftness of character is on full display here — as well as the humour that she’s used to excellent effect before.

The cheese. Good heavens, the cheese.

All in all, I recommend this wee collection. It’s worth a look.

Pretty but broken: MASS EFFECT: ANDROMEDA

Mass Effect: Andromeda is, as most people have probably gathered, the fourth and latest instalment in Bioware’s Mass Effect series, and the first not to star the iconic Commander Shepard. It’s also done a lot less well for Bioware than anticipated, with no further content for the game announced. I’m not surprised that it hasn’t done as well as Bioware might have expected from previous titles in the series: while extremely pretty, as a role-playing game and as a narrative experience, Andromeda is pretty comprehensively broken.

And I say this as an avid consumer of Bioware’s style of character-driven plot-heavy RPGs: I’ve replayed the first three Mass Effect games at least three times each, and invested so many hours into the Dragon Age games that I positively quail at the thought of tallying up the total time.

Andromeda sees a group of at least a hundred thousand people from the Milky Way — the long-lived asari and the equally long-lived krogan, the short-lived salarians, the military-oriented turians, and, as always, humans — take a 600-year cryosleep journey to the galaxy next door, for the sake of adventure, exploring new frontiers, and unconsidered colonialism. (It is unclear whether, or how much, the leaders of the Andromeda Initiative know about the threat the Reapers pose to the Milky Way, which Shepard spends so much time fighting in the original trilogy.) Andromeda opens aboard the human colony ship, or ark, as it arrives in the Andromeda galaxy, immediately encounters a dangerous and mysterious space phenomenon (consistently referred to later as the Scourge), and discovers that the planet they were hoping to settle has had something catastrophic and weird happen to it.

The player-character can be a woman or a man, the daughter or son of the human Pathfinder, Alec Ryder. The Pathfinder’s job is apparently to be the point exploration person and authority on the challenges and opportunities of new planets. The Pathfinder is also linked to an artificial intelligence called SAM, which Alec Ryder himself developed. SAM provides data and analysis to the Pathfinder. On your first mission, you learn your brother (if you play as Female Ryder, which obviously I did) is in a coma due to things going wrong as he was coming out of cryo, and by the time the first mission is over, Alec Ryder is dead, and the younger conscious Ryder has been unexpectedly promoted to the role of Pathfinder.

There are two areas in particular where Andromeda falls down compared to other games both in the franchise and from the parent game developer. One is in its characters. The other is in how it integrates its narrative structure (and available choices) into its open-world sandbox.

Among the attractions of a character-driven RPG are the characters. Andromeda stumbles here from the beginning. I don’t know whether I’d feel more identification with Younger Ryder’s family issues if we’d actually met the brother and the father before the first mission kicks off, or if I’d had a sibling or a father of my own. But something about the initial introduction of Andromeda‘s player-character feels alienating and off, much more so than in Bioware’s other games that gave you a family and a context. In Dragon Age: Origins, for example, you spend a certain amount of time with your family/friends before significant shit kicks off, while in Dragon Age 2, although we open in medias res, this is followed by a period of downtime and adjustment which lets you get familiar with your family and new friend Aveline — and gives you a range of options in how you react to that family and friend. The other Bioware games don’t begin in the same fashion — Mass Effect provides a military officer, Dragon Age Inquisition a sole survivor, and they both in different ways avoid needing to make an immediate emotional connection to the player-character’s nearest and dearest.

Andromeda, on the other hand, presents you with a set of pieces that are supposed to have emotional valence, but doesn’t do the work needed to imbue them with connection and meaning. This is poor writing, especially for a game based on your choices. The game assumes that you, as the player-character, will care about Random Father and Random Brother without investing any real time or depth in those relationships.

This is a failure that continues through Andromeda’s approach towards characterisation, particularly with regard to the characters who become members of your crew and potentially your party. Other Bioware games — notably the first and second Mass Effect games, Dragon Age: Origins, and Dragon Age 2 — made you work to recruit characters. In the case of Dragon Age Origins, you don’t even encounter some characters until you’re about a third of the way through, giving you plenty of time to appreciate them as individuals, while in Dragon Age 2 and the first Mass Effect game, bringing characters on board occurred in the course of the plot, so that your introduction to them provided an impetus for both character and narrative development. In Mass Effect 2, character recruitment was a large part of the plot: something that, together with the excellent character-writing, worked especially well in building emotional investment in these individuals. (Mass Effect 2 and 3 had the advantage of being able to leverage your existing investment in some of these characters, but the writing exploited these pre-existing emotional hooks in extremely effective ways.) Too, previous Bioware games — in particular the Dragon Age ones — made you work to develop a rapport with your party members, making your relationship with them depend on their approval or disapproval of your actions.

In Andromeda, there’s none of this. The characters show up without you needing to do a thing, and their introduction lacks… well, character. I remember vividly Mass Effect‘s introductions to Ashley, Garrus, Tali, Wrex and Liara; ME2’s Miranda, Mordin, Samira, Thane, Garrus, Tali, Grunt, Jack, that moment where you meet Dr. Chakwas again and it’s like a shocking relief; ME3’s re-introductions to Ashley (I only saved Kaiden once), Liara, Grunt, Garrus; Origins‘ first meetings with Alistair, Morrigan, Leliana and Sten; DA2’s introductions of Aveline and Anders, and even Inquisition‘s individual introductions of Cassandra, Varric, Solas, Josephine, the Iron Bull, Vivienne, and Dorian: they stand out. Some more successfully than others, but they’re all individual moments, ones that give a powerful sense of the characters as people with agendas and desires of their own.

Hell, I remember Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic and its first introductions to Carth, Bastila, and the Twi’lek and the cat-person whose names I’ve lost to the mists of history but whose initial introductions left me with abiding senses of them as individuals.

Andromeda‘s characters lack these powerful moments. With one or two exceptions — the turian smuggler/fixer Vetra, who’s raising a teenaged sister, and the weary krogan mercenary Drack — they come across as bland ciphers, or worse, annoying ones. (Liam and Peebee, I’m looking at you.) Beyond Drack and Vetra, they lack any real suggestion of wanting connections or emotional lives of their own, any suggestion of a present life outside and beyond their immediate use to Ryder. This lack of depth in the characters and the player-character’s interactions with them provides a corresponding shallowness of emotional investment. Why should I care about these people?

I don’t have an answer. Or rather, the answer is that I really don’t: I kept playing more from hope that things would eventually start coming together to provide an emotionally powerful experience, and growing more and more dissatisfied when they didn’t. I suspect this reaction was exacerbated by the diffusion of narrative tension created by the open-world approach to gameplay: in order to avoid the narrative seeming like an arbitrary series of fetch-quests, open-world gameplay needs to be constructed very carefully, and deep attention needs to be paid to structure and pacing. Without this attention, narrative drive — forward momentum — falls apart.

Dragon Age: Inquisition, Bioware’s other game to use the open-world approach, suffered from some of this diffusion of tension. But there, by and large, the characterisation was strong enough to bridge some of the gaps, and the pacing didn’t fall quite so slack — possibly because Inquisition offers its characters at least one fairly striking reversal, and the binary choices that the narrative ends up providing at fork points feel a little more meaningful. Andromeda — it’s pretty, I grant you. Actually, it’s visually stunning: the environments and the landscapes are utter works of art. But even those gorgeous environments grow tedious when one is engaged in a seemingly-endless series of fetch-quests, and when none of one’s choices as a player-character feel as though they have any particular weight or impact.

Also, as a game, it has a deeply unexamined relationship to colonialism. Its assumptions made me feel uncomfortable, for while the game seemed to feel that the thematic argument it was having was about artificial intelligence, modification to bodies, and life (insofar as it was having a thematic argument), there’s this swathe of hey sure it’s perfectly fine to invite yourself into someone else’s house and mess with their stuff that’s just… floating around.

And yet. And yet I finished the game, grinding my way through the final back-and-forth-and-back-again that was the climax and unsatisfying conclusion. I don’t know whether that says more about my stubbornness or Andromeda‘s ability to compel me to find out what happened next — despite all its many, manifold flaws.

I don’t think I’d recommend it to an existing Mass Effect fan, though. Part of my dissatisfaction with it was the way it reminded me just enough of what I loved about the earlier games to tantalise me with its possibilities, without ever giving me the same narrative fulfilment.

There is more I could say, but it would mostly be repetition upon the same theme. They don’t make ’em like they used to, apparently. Either that, or I’m getting even less easy to please in my old age.

Women Who Love Women: October Dispatches from FF Romance

Ronica Black, Under Her Wing, and Karis Walsh, Set the Stage. Bold Strokes Books, 2017.

Every month, as you may recall, I go to look at the Bold Strokes Books ARCs on Netgalley. Every month I hope to be surprised by something that takes my breath away with its quality.

Most months, I’m what you might describe as hideously disappointed.

For October, most of the offerings weren’t even entertainingly bad. (Though at least one, true to form, opens in transit, and yet more feature women with traditionally masculine names. Not that this is a criterion of badness: it’s just a pattern I’ve been noting.) Most of them are merely boringly bad, with the mediocre lack of any kind of life or competent writing that is pervasive in FF romance — much as I really wish it wasn’t.

However! There are two books that I can commend to your attention. One isn’t what I’d call good — it’s passable, though better than the rest — but the other is actually pretty compelling.

Ronica Black’s Under Her Wing is the book that’s passable. Kassandra is a school librarian — growing increasingly dissatisfied with her job and her life — who’s always thought she’s straight. When her dog goes missing after a break-in, she meets the owner of a no-kill shelter. Jayden, said owner, is a lesbian who plays the field with abandon, and comes on really strong to Kassandra due to a mix-up involving Jayden’s best friend Mel constantly setting her up with other women. After this initial misunderstanding, Kassandra starts volunteering at the shelter, and the two of them grow closer — not without some truly terrible miscommunications and misunderstandings. In the background lurks the Chekov’s gun of Kassandra’s break-in, and the resolution of this plot element is perhaps the weakest part of a not very strong book.

The other book is Karis Walsh’s Set the Stage. After getting out of a toxic relationship where she put her dreams on indefinite hold in order to support her girlfriend, Emilie Danvers finally has a chance to get back into professional acting. With a one-year contract for a place in a company in Oregon that performs plays for a long festival, she’s determined not to let anything get in her way. She’s doubting herself enough without the addition of romance. But romance is exactly what she finds, in the person of Arden Phillips, an employee of the park in and around which a lot of the festival plays take place. Arden has a history of theatre people leaving her: she was raised by her grandparents after her director father and actor mother left to pursue their careers in various cities around the world.

But her attractive to Emilie — and Emilie’s attraction to her — is instant and mutual. Though both of them try to keep things platonic, their friendship swiftly escalates to more. But Emilie’s career goals (and insecurities) and Arden’s background stand between them and any longer-term happiness. They’re each going to work out what they really want, and what they’re willing to give up, if they’re going to stay together.

Walsh’s strongest point is her characters. Set the Stage‘s protagonists feel real and human, and the barriers between them and a lasting relationship aren’t the kind that can simply be cleared up by a single honest conversation. That makes for a pretty decent romance. It’s still not quite my style of thing: I’m not especially fond of contemporaries that don’t have anything else but the romance plot going on. But it’s better than okay.

THE RAJ AT WAR by Yasmin Khan

Yasmin Khan, The Raj at War: A People’s History of India’s Second World War. Vintage. London, 2016. (First published 2015.)

It hadn’t occurred to me until I heard of The Raj at War that India must have been central, and centrally important, to the Allies’ efforts in World War II — particularly once East Asia became an active theatre of war, with the Japanese attack on Hawaii in 1941 and the invasion of Burma in 1942. Indian regiments and Indian soldiers fought in all major theatres of war, and the fact that their contributions are not strongly remembered is a failure of historiography — almost as great a failure of historiography as the ones which meant I knew about the famines in the Soviet Ukraine in the 1920s and 1930s, and in Greece under Nazi occupation, but not about the Bengal famine in India during the war: a famine ignored by Churchill and made worse by the action and inaction of British politicians and civil servants.

The Raj at War tells the story of World War II from an Indian perspective. It’s a relatively short book to cover a continent’s experience of six years of war: 416 pages including the end matter and index. Khan is a careful writer, and a skilled one: her brevity feels efficient, rather than forced, and she moves from grand overview to focusing in on a particular person or detail with great smoothness. This is history writing at its best, and it’s no fault of Khan’s — indeed, it is much to her credit — that my strongest reaction is: but I want to know MORE!

Khan’s account ranges from the start of the war, when the British empire mobilised its Indian regiments, through the changes in Indian society that resulted from the Raj working to put India on a total war footing, to the challenges and changes to the Raj’s traditional class and race systems, the mass mobilisation of labour, the hardship and suffering undergone by many, and the widespread tension between an empire that said it was fighting for “freedom” and the Indian people to whom it refused to listen or engage with on the question of self-rule or independence — tension that would in the end lead to the British withdrawal from India.

This is not a book about Indian regiments on the battlefield, or indeed a book about battles at all. It is more an overview of the social developments that occurred and social conditions that prevailed in India as a consequence of India’s experience of being a British possession during WWII. And, in consequence, some of the political developments during that time.

Yasmin Khan has also written a book about the partition of India and Pakistan in 1947 (The Great Partition: The Making of India and Pakistan). With this in mind, it is easy to understand why at times her account of India’s war experience tends towards the teleological, particularly with respect to the changes in Indian nationalism and nationalist feeling during this time. The Raj at War does that thing of so many history books, where because something momentous did happen, the narrative defaults to the assumption that it was unavoidable that it would happen, which is a historiographical tendency that deeply annoys me.

That said, this is a really interesting and compelling piece of history-writing. I learned a great deal from it — so much that even to summarise the highlights could go on for pages. It’s fascinating, and I recommend it highly.

Women Who Love Women: November Dispatches From FF Romance

Gun Brooke, Arrival, and Carsen Taite, A More Perfect Union. Bold Strokes Books, 2017.

This month’s set of offerings (care of the Bold Strokes Books’ Netgalley page) are largely unobjectionably boring. We’re mostly short on the hilariously awful — as far as I can tell from first chapters, and barring Shea Godfrey’s laughably overdramatic opening to King of Thieves — and long on the deeply uninspired prose and tediously poor characterisation.

I’m cruel because I care. Let’s be fair: lesbian romance needs to up its game if it’s going to play for a bigger slice of the romance market pie. It’s not going to manage that without paying a lot more attention to the craft of catching a reader’s attention. Many readers aren’t short of other options.

I finished two novels out of the six (or was it eight? They blur together) that were available this month. One of those was Gun Brooke’s Arrival, the latest novel in a science fiction romance series. The other is Carsen Taite’s A More Perfect Union, a romance between a military officer involved in investigating misconduct at an officers’ training school in Washington, and a political fixer who has no reason to trust the military. Neither of these novels were actually good, mind you — though A More Perfect Union was tolerably okay — but they shared one feature that set them apart from their peers this month. Their characters were interesting and had personality. And not the kind of personality that makes you want to throw them off a cliff, either.

Gun Brooke’s Exodus series, of which Arrival is the latest instalment, is terrible science fiction. The worldbuilding is shoddy and inconsistent, the technology hasn’t been thought through, and the ongoing political situation is of the “throw a bunch of terrorist threats and racism analogies at the ceiling with no particular co-ordination and see what sticks”  sort. There’s a large, well-organised group of people who’ve left their homeworld on a colony ship because they don’t like the fact it’s being taken over by “changers” — mutants, basically, like the X-men, who seem to have been fighting the government for a while. But wait! There are also “good” changers, some of whom have hidden themselves aboard the Exodus vessel. Fortunately, it seems, because the bad changers have been trying to sabotage the project from the get-go.

The worldbuilding’s a hot mess, basically. And Arrival is also a hot mess structurally. But it has a pair of interesting characters.

Lieutenant Pamas Seclan was held captive by hostile changers for years before she escaped. She forged identity documents to get herself aboard the Exodus project, hoping to be able to reconnect with her adult children, Aniwyn and Pherry, at the end of the journey. (Her children were left to grow up under the debatable care of her abusive husband.) Aniwyn is now known as Spinner, and a Commander in the military. But Pamas’s hopes of peaceful reconciliation with her children are dashed when the new colony’s medical facilities are attacked with a virulently dangerous substance.

Darmiya Do Voy is a scientist and a member of the advance team that helped get the colony ready to receive colonists. Her homeworld was destroyed and she’s one of only a handful of survivors. She’s also one of Spinner’s best friends, which makes things awkward when she and Pamas immediately find themselves forging a connection. As the two of them negotiate Pamas’s complicated past and her relationship with her daughter, they find themselves at the forefront of attempts to defend the colony from the antagonistic changers.

The plot as a whole doesn’t make any sense, I should tell you. But the characters and their arc are entertaining and fun.

Meanwhile, Carsen Taite’s A More Perfect Union features Major Zoey Granger, an officer who blew the whistle on fraudulent dealings at her base. A chance meeting with political fixer Rook Daniels as Granger’s en route to testify before Congress results in a fast-growing attraction between the two women. When Granger’s reassigned to work at the Pentagon — and when her first job is investigating some young officers whose potential misdeeds are likely to have political complications — she and Daniels meet again professionally, and this professional relationship is somewhat antagonistic. Both of them are convinced that the other is holding back relevant information, and that the other doesn’t understand the real picture. They also find it difficult to trust each other on a personal, relationship level. When a Pentagon officer commits suicide, things get even more dangerous.

A More Perfect Union is tolerable romantic suspense, but it too is off-balance structurally and pacing-wise, and its characters, apart from its romantic leads, are thin and two-dimensional. But its romantic leads have characters, and their growth from miscommunication and mistrust towards mutuality is treated reasonably well. I wouldn’t say run out and read it now — but of Bold Strokes Books’ available romances this month, this one might well be the best.

“You look different when you tell the truth. Your eyes change.” ATOMIC BLONDE (2017) – Patreon

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It is August 2017. I’m tired and overwhelmed by world events (the USA, Iraq, Finland, Malaysia, Catalonia, and of course Australia’s wonderful idea to hold a marriage equality plebiscite), local events, and how much work I have to do in order to get paid.

This is not a review of the news, though, but of Atomic Blonde, the film I went to see in order to distract myself from all of that.

Based on the graphic novel The Coldest City by Sam Hart and Anthony Johnston, directed by David Leitch (in his first feature-length film), and starring Charlize Theron, Atomic Blonde is a spy film set in 1989 Berlin. Claustrophobic, stylish, rooted in its time and place, Atomic Blonde reminded me a little bit of The Sandbaggers, a little bit of The Bourne Identity, and a lot of Greg Rucka’s spy novels and graphic novels (some of which, come to think of it, were published by the same outfit as The Coldest City).

The cinematography is excellent. There’s a recurring motif of shots through doors and windows, of shots in reflections, of mirrors, of things seen at an angle or edgewise-on. Everything is angles, everything is deceptive, nothing you see can be taken at face value. The characters are all angles and smooth surfaces, frictionless except where they’re playing it rough: everything is nested betrayals and triple-crosses.

Theron plays spy/agent Lorraine Broughton with a chill like the ice-bath we see her climbing out of in the opening scenes — bruised, battered, bloody and still somehow entirely collected. Her performance is light on dialogue, in contrast to the ninety-to-the-dozen chatter of James McAvoy’s David Percival (played with a combination of boyish charm, brutal self-interest, and sincerely dangerous competence): instead, her character is given definition through body-language. The physicality of Theron’s performance is intense, at times almost feral, in a way that fits seamlessly with the really good fight choreography.

(The fight choreography is really good: utterly brutal, unforgiving, full of found objects and with occasional appropriate punch-drunk stumbling. It’s visceral in a way that fight choreography seldom manages.)

Atomic Blonde is a spy film in which most of the characters seem to end up dead of Being A Spy.

It also portrays a queer relationship.

Theron’s Broughton is approached by French agent Delphine (Sofia Boutella), a younger and rather more innocent spy. Broughton is enthusiastically into it. (An aside: I didn’t know I wanted to see something like this until I did, and I didn’t know Atomic Blonde had a queer relationship in it until I saw it. A queer relationship! Treated just like a straight one! Not marked out in any way, not a giant part of the plot as in Carol or The Handmaiden, just spies being spies in bed.) This relationship is the only place where we see a hint of something that could be considered softness in Broughton, the only place where she’s a little less than perfectly guarded. It seems that she does actually feel something for Delphine — enough, at least, to tell her to get out of Berlin rather than killing her when Broughton thinks that Delphine has double-crossed her.

Of course, Bury Your Gays is a thing. So I knew Delphine was doomed from the moment she and Broughton kissed. And hey, what do you know? I was right. It’s a film that buries its gays, and I don’t want to say, “But at least it has them” (but at least it has them), although having them at all is unusual for a spy film.

But it’s 2017. I wanted to at least to be able to hope for Delphine to walk off alive by the time the credits rolled. I want there to be enough films where that happens that Queer Death becomes unpredictable. Not, “Oh, she’s doomed now, right?” “Oh, maybe NOT DOOMED JUST YET — nope, that was a fakeout. Doomed.” “Sigh.”

The strangulation scene, when Delphine very nearly fights off her murderer, is so annoying wrong. Hollywood has this tendency to show both CPR and garrotting to be very effective within a short timeframe. In reality, if you are going to choke someone to death, even if you crush their windpipe, it’s going to take a while. Even if it is restriction of bloodflow rather than oxygen that’s the root cause. And they’re going to be unconscious for a few minutes first. Like, three-six minutes. This is why, in sport martial arts, you can actually choke someone out without killing them. Their eyes don’t just roll up and go straight to dead!

I knew better than to expect Atomic Blonde to subvert the Buried Gays/Dead Girlfriend tropes, but seriously, GIRL AIN’T DEAD YET USE A BULLET. Bullets are harder to argue with: the part of me that knows how strangulation works kept expecting her to show up later, at odds with the part of me that knows how Hollywood works.

Atomic Blonde is a good film. I’m going to go see it again. It works well. (And it has a really great soundtrack).

But, you know. Fuck the Bury Your Gays trope. It’s boring and predictable and tedious and bad storytelling. Atomic Blonde would have been a better film without it.

 


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Sleeps With Monsters: The Weird West of Wynonna Earp

A new column over at Tor.com:

I didn’t know I needed a weird modern Western—complete with curses, demons, and complicated family dynamics—in my life. But apparently I didn’t know what I was missing! It turns out that this is exactly what I wanted, when it comes in the form of SEVEN24/IDW Entertainment’s Wynonna Earp, created by Emily Andras, based on the comic by Beau Smith, and starring Melanie Scrofano as the eponymous Wynonna.

THE HOUSE OF BINDING THORNS by Aliette de Bodard

THE HOUSE OF BINDING THORNS, US cover art.

The House of Binding Thorns by Aliette de Bodard. Gollancz, 2017. (Ace/Roc, 2017.)

The House of Binding Thorns takes the gothic atmospheric politics of The House of Shattered Wings and ramps them up to a pitch of intensity that I really wasn’t expecting. The House of Shattered Wings was an intense novel, a stunning work of art set in a fin-de-siècle Paris. A Paris ruled by Houses competing for resources in the postapocalyptic decay that came in the wake of some vastly destructive war, filled with alchemists and magicians and Fallen angels, ordinary people and immigrant Immortals.

In The House of Shattered Wings, we first met Philippe, an Annamite immortal who was caught up in the affairs of House Silverspires thanks to his affection for a young Fallen called Isabelle. We also first met Madeleine, an alchemist formerly of House Hawthorne with an addiction to angel dust that was killing her, who had fled to House Silverspires after a coup that caused a change in the leadership of House Hawthorne twenty years before; and Asmodeus, the head of House Hawthorne, one of the Fallen with a twisty mind, a sadistic streak, and a firm commitment to protecting his own. We also met the dragon kingdom beneath the Seine, gradually crumbling in the tainted waters — as much of this Paris is gradually sliding into decay. In The House of Binding Thorns, we meet all three again.

Madeleine, cast out by House Silverspires, has returned to House Hawthorne and the overlordship of its terrifying master. Asmodeus has a use for her, although he will do worse than kill her if she takes any more of the drug to which she is addicted, and so she joins an embassy from House Hawthorne to the dragon kingdom beneath the Seine, an embassy that is arranging Asmodeus’s diplomatic marriage to a dragon prince. The dragon kingdom has their own difficulties, and Asmodeus intends to use them for his own ends. But the dragon kingdom is not without its own resources. One of their princes, Thuan, has infiltrated House Hawthorne as a spy. When things go awry with the marriage arrangements, he is recalled and married to Asmodeus himself — and discovers that Asmodeus means his death and the conquest of the dragon kingdom, or would if his leadership of the House were not under threat from within and without.

Meanwhile, Philippe is working as a sort-of doctor in a poor district, among the Houseless. At the end of The House of Shattered Wings, he’d vowed to find a way to restore Isabelle to life, but so far he has not been able to manage to learn how he could accomplish such a thing — although he knows it is possible to bring Fallen back from the dead. When he’s threatened by strange magic, he finds himself aided by Berith, a Houseless Fallen who is Asmodeus’s estranged Fall-sister, and her human partner Françoise, a member of the Annamite community. Berith is crippled, for a Fallen, and slowly dying: Françoise, meanwhile, is expecting their child. Berith wants Philippe to accompany Françoise to bring a message to Asmodeus and plead for a reconciliation. In return, she promises to give him his heart’s desire: the knowledge he needs to restore Isabelle to life. The plots of Hawthorne and dragon kingdom won’t leave Berith and Françoise alone, though: power is the only real currency in Paris, and Berith does not, on her own, have enough to keep her family safe.

This book. This book. If I call it utterly masterful that is still perhaps an insufficient superlative. De Bodard performs a tricky balancing act in keeping all the politics, all the plots and intrigues, aligned and moving forward, never dropping a thread, seeding early chapters with a whole lot of Chekov’s guns that go off like well-timed artillery volleys as matters draw towards a conclusion. Where The House of Shattered Wings was good, The House of Binding Thorns is even better. Wrenchingly tense, suffused with a creeping undercurrent of atmospheric horror, of decline-and-fall, and yet vividly alive.

For all that it partakes of the atmosphere of the gothic horror, thick with mildew and rot, at times deeply claustrophobic, shut-in — Paris is the world in microcosm, and House Hawthorne and the dragon kingdom are each in their own ways very much enclosed — The House of Binding Thorns is not actually horror. Horror is concerned with futility and destruction, but even Asmodeus, however horrifying one might find him as a person, is fundamentally concerned with the preservation and protection of his dependents: with building, or at least maintaining, the life of his House. De Bodard’s characters are all rich and complex, and deeply situated within a network of connections and obligations. The House of Binding Thorns is, as much as anything else, a book about family and community, the ties that bind — the ties you choose, and the ties you don’t. It’s also deeply, fundamentally, interested in the problems, and responsibilities, of power, and connected to that, the (post-colonial and) colonial relationship that this decaying Paris has to the Annamite community in its midst, and that the dragon kingdom has with itself and with Paris and its Houses.

Also, this book? This book is queer as fuck. It has more obvious queer families, and queer relationships, than heterosexual ones. And it treats its queer relationships — its queer families — as utterly normal (well, apart from the part where they involve Fallen angels and dragon princes and such matters) to a degree that’s still unusual enough to make parts of me want to cry with gratitude. It does so much so right, and so well, that I cannot help but love it wholly and entirely.

It really is an utterly magnificent achievement.

 

THE HOUSE OF BINDING THORNS, UK cover

 


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WELLINGTON’S ENGINEERS: MILITARY ENGINEERING IN THE PENINSULAR WAR 1808-1814 by Mark S. Thompson

WELLINGTON’S ENGINEERS book cover.

 

Mark S. Thompson, Wellington’s Engineers: Military Engineering in the Peninsular War 1808-1814. Pen & Sword Books, Barnsley Yorks., 2015.

The Peninsular War refers to the campaigns in Portugal and Spain during the Napoleonic Wars. (The most prominent generals involved in this conflict were the English general Sir Arthur Wellesley — better known by his later title as Duke of Wellington — and the French Marshal-of-the-Empire Nicolas Jean-de-Dieu Soult. The Spanish and Portuguese military personalities of this period have been less well-remembered by history.) I’ve been vaguely interested in this theatre of the Napoleonic Wars since my childhood fascination with Bernard Cornwell’s Sharpe novels, and I’m always interested in historical logistics — the difficulties of transport, the technologies of moving large numbers of people and large amounts of material in a period before the invention of the internal-combustion engine and a modern road system — so I decided to give this book a shot.

Unfortunately, contrary to the implication of its subtitle — Military Engineering in the Peninsular WarWellington’s Engineers is far more concerned with the engineers themselves, their personalities, and their political conflicts among themselves and with the military leadership, than with the logistics and details of the engineering challenges which they faced in the course of their duties. That’s not to say that Thompson doesn’t talk about engineering. He does. But he talks about engineering in terms of who went where, and when they went, and what they built there, and how many guns were employed in the course of a siege, and why the sieges were lifted, rather than talking about actual engineering details. What’s involved in digging a trench in a 19th-century siege? What sort of thing is a Napoleonic redoubt or a gun battery? How do you set a mine, or blow up a bridge, or build and maintain a pontoon bridge? These things are sadly not covered in any detail, although Thompson does offer a brief appendix on pontoon bridges, and one on the education of the Royal Engineers in the British Army of the time.

I will confess to a little disappointment.

Wellington’s Engineers: Military Engineering in the Peninsular War 1808-1814 discusses the employment of Royal Engineers during the Peninsular War chronologically. It comprises nine chapters, an introduction, and a conclusion: seven of the chapters deal with one year of the war, while one chapter (chapter three) discusses the lines of Torres Vedras and the defence of Portugal in greater detail and the final chapter (chapter nine) takes the narrative of events from 1813 to 1814, out of the Iberian Peninsula, and into France itself. Thompson does a good job in general of keeping timelines straight and bringing documentary evidence clearly into the narrative, as well as letting the letters humanise the subjects of this history.

But. (You knew there was a but coming, didn’t you?) Thompson’s really not a great writer. His sentences are at times strained, his narrative has no energy or sense of personality (well, apart from a prosingly dull one), and he has no sense of pacing or tension. At times he confuses the right word for the almost right one, and he has very little interest in discussing anything thematically — or at least, thematically in such a way that I can tell there’s a theme. And the little tables he uses to illustrate siege timelines are annoyingly confusing.

If you have a particular interest in the Royal Engineers as individuals during the Peninsular War, or a timeline and discussion of what sort of engineering works took place, this is a decent book. If you’re interested in the relationships between senior engineers and the military leadership, then it’s actually quite good. If you want something that looks in detail at the technology and techniques of military engineering in this period, though?

This is not that book.

 


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DISHONORED 2: First Mission Reactions (A Long Day in Dunwall)

  

This is not a review. Well, not exactly.

I’ve had Dishonored 2 for a couple of months — more like four, actually — but I only recently cracked the box and loaded it up. I enjoyed Dishonored‘s worldbuilding, design, and (for the most part) storyline, and I’ve had a weakness for stealth-murder (or stealth-sneaky) games for a very long time.

My main issues with Dishonored were the lack of options with regard to the protagonist’s gender, and its lack of a realistic diversity (everyone was white) given that it took place in a port city.

Dishonored 2?

So far, Dishonored 2 is everything I loved about Dishonored with so very many fewer of the issues I had with it. I am DELIGHTED that one of the protagonist options is Emily Kaldwin, Empress of Dunwall — who apparently spends her limited time away from empress-ing learning the skills of stealth assassin-ing from Corvo Attano, her father and chief bodyguard. (Everybody needs a hobby.) Emily, alas, is not a very fortunate empress: fifteen years to the day after her mother’s assassination, a coup (backed by magic) unseats her from her throne. (At this point, you can choose to play as either Corvo or Emily — Corvo is BORING. Of course I went with Emily.)

With her father transformed into a statue and her friend the guard captain cut down in front of her, you-as-Emily must escape the palace, make your way across the city, and set out on a quest to identify and bring down your enemies. First, though, you need to make your way to the harbour, where there’s a ship whose captain might prove to be an ally…

This first mission is called “A Long Day in Dunwall,” and yes. It is. Especially if you’re trying to get the complete stealth and no-killing achievements. But it’s visually stunning, and Emily comes across, in those occasional moments when she has something to say, as a much more complex and snarkier character than Corvo ever seemed in the course of Dishonored. Creeping up behind soldiers from the shadows, I felt much more intensely invested in Emily’s inner world and her (understandable) desire for revenge. Traitors! I should just stab them.

Dunwall_in_Dishonored_2

But then you reach the harbour, where the ship Dreadful Wale [sic] awaits you. Its captain is one Meagan Foster, and I was… really pretty happy to see that the first ally you encounter is a black female ship captain with one arm. She seems like a badass. 

As far as I’m concerned, Dishonored 2 is already doing better on several fronts than its predecessor. It’s prettier! Its characters are more interesting, and have more character! And it’s much better at not being all about the men.

I’m looking forward to starting mission #2…


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Alyc Helms, THE DRAGONS OF HEAVEN: Patreon not-a-review

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If what follows is slightly more incoherent than is good for it, it is because it was written when I’d lost 2.5kg due to illness in five days. (I’m still recovering.) This is meant to explain, not excuse.

Alyc Helms, The Dragons of Heaven. Angry Robot Books, 2015. Copy courtesy of Angry Robot Books.

This is not actually a proper review, because I did not finish the book. As I mentioned in a post on Patreon a while ago, I was finding The Dragons of Heaven tedious and unappealing fare. This is not to say it is a bad book: in a different season, with different pressures on me, and if I were not ill, I might find it entertaining enough (at least entertaining enough to finish). Then again, I might not.

The Dragons of Heaven is, in this copy, 376 pages long. I have read 130 of them, and find that sufficient to declare it really Not For Me.

I didn’t realise, when I cracked its spine, that The Dragons of Heaven involved superhero narratives married to what feels like a classic urban fantasy tone. The voice, too, feels like the voice of an urban fantasy narrator: edging up on hard-boiled and noir-ish, but not quite, and taking itself a little too seriously for me to really take it seriously. But then, I’ve never quite been able to get the appeal of superhero narratives — and superhero stories in which a young woman (and street magician) from San Francisco goes to China in search of the Chinese dragon who trained her grandfather in the powers that led to him taking on a superhero persona, hoping to find training in turn, are an even harder sell.

*loses train of thought*

*finds it again*

Okay. Right. Missy Masters is the granddaughter of superhero Mr. Mystic. He disappeared — dead or missing. She decided to follow in his footsteps and use the powers she’s inherited to be a superhero herself.

The chapters alternate between past and present: present Missy has taken on her grandfather’s superhero persona and has got herself involved in an ongoing conflict with the local branch of organised Chinese crime, headed up by a bloke called Lao Chan. Which also involves magic. Or superpowers. Or both. Then she interrupts Lao Chan in the middle of a ritual involve the “guardians” of San Francisco’s Chinatown. Shortly after this, some kind of mystical barrier goes up around a) China b) lots of Chinatowns across the world, and Missy figures out these barriers are related to the ritual she interrupted. She has to go to China and figure out how to take the barrier back down, before something terrible happens.

Past Missy is a bit of a wannabe superhero. One night she gets in over her head, intervening in a conflict between a rather better-trained superhero and …someone with excellent training who isn’t a hero. She ends up hurt, and having thoroughly screwed up, decides she needs training. So, off to China, to search for the dragon who trained her grandfather. Along the way, she’s travelling with a tour group who end up trapped by a monster in a teahouse. (I’m not entirely sure what was the point of teahouse monster fight, or tour group people.) And then she encounters the dragon, who seems to be in the form of a young, pretty man. And I’m afraid I rather felt my hackles go up. Oh, yes, I spy a love interest! says I to myself. One who’s probably going to come with all sorts of familial and cultural complications, but I don’t see why a dragon would give any uninvited visitor the time of day, to be honest.

I don’t know if I spied a love interest correctly or not. Flicking ahead to the final pages certainly seems to imply some romantic connection between Missy and the dragon bloke. Who seems to have some kind of family connection to the figure behind the organised crime folks. Or something.

But to be honest, the reason I don’t want to read on? Is that I feel absolutely no emotional connection with the characters. Missy falls flat. In 130 pages, there’s not another significant character who comes across as really interesting. The past-present back and forth of the interwoven chapters? They don’t support each other with tension and thematic argument, not in any way that comes across to me. They confuse and drag: there are too many characters, and not enough connection. I can’t feel any reason to care, because it all seems like meaningless rushing about.

Charitably, this might be more to do with me than with the book: illness and pressure does odd things to my brain. On the other hand, it could just be that I really don’t care about any of these people and their rushing-about.